INTRODUCTION : The reason to get an education is to
succeed
financially
SUPPORTING PARAGRAF 1 : Get a job
(Example) : Everyone
need a job for them life to get what they want and what they need
(reason) : A
few companies need employees who has done an education from high school or
lectures
(personal story) : I
just want get a job from a biggest company and make my parents proud of me. So I must have a big knowledge and an
education to be get a succeed financially
SUPPORTING PARAGRAF 2 : Make my parents proud
(Example) : Study in collage to get more
education and knowledge
(reason) : Because
to get more education and knowledge just needed diligent to be a clever person
(personal story) : If
I’m diligent and clever i think I’ll be get a good score in collage and many company can accept me in their
company. And absolutely I can make my parents proud.
CONLUSION : To get a
job we must has more an education and knowledge to be a succeed financially and
make parents proud
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INTRODUCTION 2
Education begins with parents. Parents send us to educate more so
that we can get a good life for the future and parents will be proud if we
succeed in financially. If we have an good education and knowledge we can share
the knowledge for the people who want it.
